I did it, I read Sun Warrior. It was a book I picked up with a great deal of trepidation and no small amount of dread. The House of Night Series remains one of the worst I have ever endured and Moon Chosen manages to plum still deeper depths. I did not have high expectations for Sun Warrior
Which made reading Sun
Warrior, almost a pleasant surprise. Oh, not because it was good. Not
because it came even close to good. Not because it could even see good on a
clear day with a telescope. Because it wasn’t remotely. Nor was it not
deeply problematic in many many ways (especially dwelling on a lot of rape as
well as some really terrible treatment of the former slaves the Companions
controlled) But it managed to avoid a whole lot of the most awful traits of the
first book by… basically pretending they never happened or by retconning or by
brushing over them super quickly.
Like the book tries
to emphasise what a wonderful caring healer Mari is… we’re all completely
avoiding the way she just abandoned her people and listened to them scream. At
best we have a brief nod while everyone rallies round Mari to tell her she’s
amazing and we spend the rest of this book with just about everyone treating
Mari like the second coming. Or there’s the racial coding and Blackface of the
last book which is just ignored in this book. The description of Earth Walkers
as ugly vs the “refined” features of the Companions has been dropped entirely.
The Nightfever is there, but handwaved and we’re all far more concerned
by the new plague from the Skin Stealers. She even develops a whole new load of
traditions about Clan Weaver weaving - which sounds simplistic, but last book
Mari didn’t think her people were capable of art.
It’s not that the
book has changed, dispensed with or otherwise redeemed the badness of the last
book: it’s just pretended none of it ever happened.
It does have its own
problematic elements which largely stem from the writing: it’s horribly slow
pace, the endless telling-with-no-showing and the Mary Sue omniscience of the
main characters held together with a whole lot
of magical plot glue.
This book, this
oh-so-long-book, covers about a week, maybe a fortnight. And in that time Mari
and Nik decide to create a whole new society called the Pack where all people
come together in mutual love and tolerance. Which sounds nice - except remember
like 2 days ago these Earth Walker women were imprisoned and enslaved by the
Companions. They were enslaved for generations as a people and some of these
women had literally spent many years in captivity. It is REASONABLE for these
women to be at least a little wary of the Companions. It is reasonable for
these women to be more than a little concerned when Mari decides to host
several Companions in their BIRTHING BURROW. The place where pregnant women of
the Clan give birth. And some of these Companions were literally among the
raiding party that kidnapped several Clan women AND killed Leda, Mari’s mother
and pretty much destroyed the Clan, a few weeks ago. Hey, y’know, it’s not
exactly an act of vicious bigotry for the these women to think that they’d
rather their enslavers not camp in the most sensitive parts of their home. But
Mari treats them as grossly intolerant and drives some of the women out for not
embracing them men who hunted and owned them 2 days before - and no-one
challenges her on this